Foundation: Laid

Last night I finished editing Part Two, only to think of something that was still a little off about Part One. So once again I went back to it, rolled it over in my mind, and changed a couple of details that resulted in my having to go back through most of it and rework it to fit those details. I'm sure I missed something somewhere. Oh well, that's why I'll be reading it again.

I did find a bit in Part Two that I forgot I put in, but was pleased with because it alludes to something that MMC2 doesn't actually go into detail about until Part Three. Not sure if this was because I had his character planned so well or because I subconsciously remembered that I wrote the first part and wrote the second part to go with it. It's also possible that it was just a fortunate coincidence.

Once I finish editing Part Three I get to go back on the computer and make the technical and basic changes I indicated (approximately 900,000 of them), then have it printed up so I can read through it again and make any changes that affect the flow of the story before I send it out to the beta readers. I really hope all this editorial effort helps me find an agent/publisher when I'm done.